I understand the need to produce a book quickly, but it would be nice if the author could do a better job at proofreading and editing. Likewise, the author never seems to settle on the team’s name: is it the Storms or the Shooters? (and don’t even get me started on how bad of a name that is). No major plot holes, but questions do arise at points — such as why is the team on a month-long away trip? Perhaps the author needs to learn as much about hockey as the heroine.

Please fix the words! Annoying to be stopped so often because of words missing the last letter or incorrect tense. I would bet the print version does not have these errors and so many of them. Way to ruin a really good story. It’s not just a few or here and there it’s through the entire story.

Good read.

The story was decent but I was so distracted by the simple errors. Someone needs to majorly proofread this book.

I'm not sure why but recently I've had an obsession with hockey books (I know nothing about the sport). This is definitely the best one I've read so far. Just the right amount of steam and drama. Absolutely loved it