Her heroine is petulant and peevish instead of passionate. The book is not a romance, it is a story about a mother and her two brats- one all brat and one brat adjacent. I noticed in another story I read by the author that she spends very little time with dialogue or developing a relationship between the couple, but focuses her energy on the relationship between the heroine and someone/something else. In the last book that I read by the author, the focus was mainly on the dog, and in this one, it was the children. The sex scenes are as tepid as last week’s oolong. The couple spend a lot of time have internal monologues, but very little in the way of dialogue. When they “fall in love”, it leaves the reader confused because the efforts were one sided, and the recipient peevish and postulating. Save your money.